Dear [Target Audience],

If you want to [desired outcome of the offer]...

and finally [specific benefit that solves their problem]…

Then this offer is going to change your life.

Here’s why:

I’m [Your Name], and [relevant background, number of years ago, or experience related to your field].

Back then, [briefly describe the struggle or problem you faced related to the offer].

But every day, [what you did to overcome that struggle, emphasizing hard work or consistency].

Then, one day, [describe a breakthrough moment, something that showed you were on the right track].

We realized [key takeaway or lesson from that breakthrough].

So that’s exactly what we did, again and again.

And the results? We achieved [specific success metric or accomplishment related to the offer].

We were so confident, we even started [something bold you did based on your success].

And it worked every time.

Then we wondered whether the same strategy would work for [describe an average person or customer, maybe even someone unlikely to succeed].

Enter [Client/Customer Example].

At [age or specific details], [Customer] wanted to [describe the customer’s goal] but [describe their initial limitations].

We gave them the formula.

And within [specific time frame], they achieved [specific result that proves the system works].

So we decided to package everything we taught [Customer], putting it into [Name of Your Offer or Product].

And we made it affordable enough so we could get it into the hands of anyone who wanted [desired outcome of the product].

And the results? They were the exact same for our students:

"[Student testimonial or review]" - [Name of Student]

"[Another testimonial]" - [Name of Customer]

It almost felt too good to be true, but it was years of hard work being boiled down into the simplest, most easy-to-understand format possible.

And now, it’s all yours.

Here’s what you’ll learn:

[Bullet point 1: Major benefit or outcome]

[Bullet point 2: Specific tactic or technique taught in the offer]

[Bullet point 3: How they’ll easily achieve a desired outcome]

[Bullet point 4: Another tangible benefit or insight gained]

[Bullet point 5: How to turn this knowledge into something valuable, like money or success]

Can't wait to see you in there!!

[Your Name]